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One third of the United States youth is over weight. Being over weight in the united states as youth is becoming more and more easy. The number one cause of childhood obesity is over eating this problem now is being found to be linked to the way kids make eating choices at schools. By Replacing things in vending machines with healthier choices kids are encouraged to make better eating choices. the reason this is such a great opportunity is because, Obesity causes health problems, the schools should be educating their youth about being healthy, and being obese can lead to expensive health care. The way that the children are turning out in the United states is not healthy. This can only be fixed if Vending machines in schools allow kids to make better choices.
One third of the United States youth is over weight. Being over weight in the united states as youth is becoming more and more easy. The number one cause of childhood obesity is over eating this problem now is being found to be linked to the way kids make eating choices at schools. By Replacing things in vending machines with healthier choices kids are encouraged to make better eating choices. the reason this is such a great opportunity is because, Obesity causes health problems, the schools should be educating their youth about being healthy, and being obese can lead to expensive health care. The way that the children are turning out in the United states is not healthy. This can only be fixed if Vending machines in schools allow kids to make better choices.
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The death of Phoebe, a teenage girl is very tragic. The way bullies treat these people is very unfair and needs to stop. Phoebe had many rough days at school due to bullies. this bullying led her to take her own life. Because bullies cause so much harm, it is best to treat the people who commit these criminal like acts like criminals. The reasons that bullies should be treated as criminals is because bulling ruins peoples lives, there are laws against harassment, and being young is no excuse for bullying. because of the life threatening way bullies treat others, it is best to treat them as criminals.
The death of Phoebe, a teenage girl is very tragic. The way bullies treat these people is very unfair and needs to stop. Phoebe had many rough days at school due to bullies. this bullying led her to take her own life. Because bullies cause so much harm, it is best to treat the people who commit these criminal like acts like criminals. The reasons that bullies should be treated as criminals is because bulling ruins peoples lives, there are laws against harassment, and being young is no excuse for bullying. because of the life threatening way bullies treat others, it is best to treat them as criminals.
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Space is a dangerous bad evil place. A new company is now starting a new age of travel/vacations. People can pay the expensive risky coast of a trip to space. This trip not only being too expensive for the average person is also very riskey. The ways that space affects a person is not fully understood and could be dangerous. because of the Risk, Cost, And the immoral way of doing testing on humans, the best way to be safe would be not sending paying customers on a mission that the effects of are not fully known.
Space is a dangerous bad evil place. A new company is now starting a new age of travel/vacations. People can pay the expensive risky coast of a trip to space. This trip not only being too expensive for the average person is also very riskey. The ways that space affects a person is not fully understood and could be dangerous. because of the Risk, Cost, And the immoral way of doing testing on humans, the best way to be safe would be not sending paying customers on a mission that the effects of are not fully known.